Hello, Vishal,
Tame aavi dard bhari kavita lakhoma tamara sabdo na baan ghana loko na bharay gayela zakham ne tazaa kari nakhe chhe.

Chandresh

fantastic, it revealed my old love, and i like to recite my old days, and your poem boosts my emotions of old days .

vishal,
aa ghazal nathi, pan koi saacha premi nu darad jaane tame aksharswaroop e kaagad(ahin web page) par utaarya chhe. Wah nahi pan maatra AAH nikdi uthi, jyaare aa kavita vaanchi..
Prem ma nishfad gayelo premi j aavi kavita vichaari ane lakhi shake.....
Sau saacha premi o ne mara sau sau salaam

Wah, Wah .......aatma janjoli nakhi tame to vishalbhai.

sacha pyaar nu dard...!

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Kaviji,
Tame loko nee aankho ne bhini kari do chho ane tame jaanta paan nathi...Aee naino nu hasvuj shu .. Jemaa paani na hoy ???

wah, saras.

hhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiii vishalji ...........
good ghazal ,aapne pan mari jem prem no experience thai gayo lage che........hanara bhi ek sher dekho........kafan na dalo mere chere pe,mujhe aadat hai muskurane ki,aaj ki raat na dafnao mujhe yaroon,aaj umeed hai unke aane ki............................ game to reply karjo..........my e-mail pusp_foram@yahoo.com